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Love at 16 Blog Hop

Since February is the month for Valentine’s Day, I thought it would be fun to join a blog hop where we write a letter to our sixteen year old self.

It’s been a while since I was sixteen (and no, I won’t tell you how long ago ;). But if I wrote a letter to myself, here is what I would say:

1) Learn to be a good friend. Don’t worry about dating or finding the right guy. Just enjoy being yourself and be a good friend.

2) You know that leader from youth group, the good looking funny one? The one who you see just as a friend? He’s the one, and he’s worth waiting for.

3) Don’t take life so seriously. Yes, be responsible. Yes, get the grades. But learn to laugh at yourself and when you fail, get back up. Failing doesn’t mean the end of the world.

4) You’re going to go through a lot, but you will become a better person for it.

Morgan Busse
Teen years 🙂

I survived my teen years. I married my best friend. And I have become a better person. Makes me wonder what I’ll learn in the next thirty years and if I could write to myself from my sixtieth year, what I would tell myself now.

How about you? If you could write to your sixteenth self, what would you say?

As part of this hop, I am giving away a $10 gift card to Amazon. Click on the link to enter: Rafflecopter Giveaway

And click here to view other participating blogs.

How Do You Say That?

Part of writing fantasy is finding or coming up with fantasy words and names. You want something that looks out of this world, yet won’t make the reader stumble. I am more of the camp that believes less is better. I don’t want my readers pausing every couple paragraphs trying to figure out what that word is, or remember who that was because the name is so different, or needing a glossary at the end of the book for every creature, species, or person. I want it simple.

That being said, I still have creative or ancient words in my books. Recently I had someone ask me how to pronounce some of them. I told this person part of the magic of reading is you get to pronounce it the way you want to. However, I know some people like to know how the author pronounces it (even I am curious sometimes as to how the author would say that word).

So here is a short guide to some of the places, people, and races in the Follower of the Word series. Enjoy!

Nierne- Scribe from Thyra. Near Nee

Avonai- Capital city of the coastal country.  A Von Aa (long “a” at end)

Azar- Capital city of Temanin Empire.  A Zar

Tala- Ruling family of the Temanin Empire.  Tal La

Palancar- Guard family for the rulers of the White City.   Palan Car

Thyra- Capital of Kerre.  Thy Ra

Kerre- Country to the far west.  Cur

Eldarans- Race of people descended from the ancients ones who accompanied the Word to the Lands.  El Dare Ans

Shadonae- Race of people of which there is little known, other than they are powerful and violent.  Shad Don Aa (long “a”)

Mordra- Beings from the Unseen World. Also known as shadows or shadow wraiths.   More Dra

That about covers the main cast of people and places. If there is a person or word I missed and you are curious, feel free to leave it in the comments and I’ll comment back on how I pronounce it 🙂

How I Publish a Novel

Two weeks ago I shared how I write a novel. Today I want to talk about how I publish a novel.

So now I have a finished manuscript, written and rewritten until the story is exactly how I pictured it in my mind. Now it is time to get some feedback. Some people use critique groups, some people use beta readers. I like to use beta readers. A beta reader is someone who may or may not be a writer, but is definitely a reader, particularly of my own genre.

At this point, I want to know if my story is working, if there are any boring parts, or is there a place where I can make it better. I don’t care about a missing “the” or the finer parts of the writing craft (by now I have most of them down pat). What I want to know is how a reader feels about my story. After all, that is who I am writing for.

I currently have two beta readers with the possibility of adding a third. These are people who I trust to give me their honest opinion, who enjoy fantasy, are avid readers, and who want to see my story succeed.

It usually takes a week or two to hear back from them. In the meantime, I either take a break or start working on my next novel. When I get their feedback, I sit down and read through all their comments and figure out if I agree with them, if they fit in with my story, and should I change anything.

After my beta read, it is time for my manuscript to head off to my editor (duh, duh, dum). I know some people get nervous about this. I don’t. I know that I have written the best book I can and poured my soul into it. I’m pretty sure my editor isn’t going to write back and tell me to throw this story out and try again. What he (or she) will do is tell me how I can improve.

This is where trust comes in. I know my editor is for me and wants me to do even better. So when I get my manuscript back a couple weeks later dripping in red ink, it’s not because my editor hates me, it is because he or she loves the story and sees how to make it even better.

This edit, by the way, is called the content edit where the story is scrutinized down to the last scene (this is not the copy edit where the grammar and punctuation is checked).

photoNow I sit down with my newly “decorated” manuscript and go through every track change my editor put in. This takes couple of weeks of 8-10 hour days. It is the most grueling part of publishing in my opinion. My husband had no idea what this was like until the edits came back on Son of Truth and I disappeared every day into our bedroom with my laptop, only to emerge for coffee and food for three weeks. I did not clean, I did not go out for lunch with friends, I barely did laundry (naked is not an option at our house lol). I worked and edited until my brain felt like mush.

Once I am done (I can’t tell you how good that feels!), I send in the new and improved manuscript. Now comes the copyedit, which thankfully is done by someone else. This is when I catch up on my housework and family. A week later and the manuscript comes back. I double check the copyeditor’s work. Hit send. A couple days later I receive the galleys. The galley is the official book (how it will appear in print and on ereaders). This is where I have one last chance to catch any last minute stuff (minor things, no changing scenes or names, just catching the occasional missing “a”).

I am awful at catching stuff. I blame it on how fast I read. My mind will automatically put in the missing word. I have a friend who is amazing at catching these kinds of details. Because of that, both of us read the galleys and catch whatever little things we can. Every time she gives me her list of errors, I find myself so thankful for her work. She is amazing!

I now put my seal of approval on the galleys. The manuscript is sent off to the print, the ebook is uploaded into Amazon, B&N, etc… And then release day arrives (*cue heavenly music*).

A book is not published in a lonely corner by one person. It is done by a group of people who love and care for the story. Will there be mistakes after the print? Yes, after all, it is humans who are producing it. But it will be the best book we could produce at this given moment in time. I will continue to grow as a writer and the publishing process will change. Even now, with the recent sale of Marcher Lord Press, I know there are changes in store for me and my books.

But for now, this is how I publish a novel.

My Thoughts on the Sale of Marcher Lord Press

Marcher Lord PressToday I was going to continue my series on how I write and publish a novel. Ironically, that might be changing in the next couple months since my publisher, Marcher Lord Press, was just purchased.

There has been a lot of different reactions to this change ranging from shock, to cautious hope, to anger, and even a hint of betrayal. Fans are known to be passionate, and that passion is definitely coming out now.

I thought that by sharing my own thoughts as one of MLP’s authors I might assuage some of the fear and wondering out there.

First, let me assure you there has been a lot of prayer over this decision. Lots and lots of prayer. I was one of the people praying. Nothing was done in haste or in greediness, but in what was best for Marcher Lord Press.

Because there was so much prayer involved, it saddened me to see that no one commented about God’s involvement in this decision when the news broke. Many people reacted, but I think people forgot that God is over everything, even this. There is no need to fear. God will accomplish what He will accomplish, even in the area of Christian speculative fiction.

Because God is sovereign, I believe we should hope, not in the “Gee, I hope this turns out well” but in the “I believe it will”. I believe Marcher Lord will continue to do what it does best: produce great speculative novels with a Christian worldview. Not because of anything we do but because God can do it. And I believe He will.

So my thoughts? I am excited to see what God is going to do. I am looking toward the future in a positive way. Is it a little scary to be in the midst of a transition like this? Yes. Especially since I still have one more book in the Follower of the Word series contracted with Marcher Lord (which I have been assured will be published).

I have also spoken already with Steve Laube, the new owner of Marcher Lord Press. I’ve known about Steve for a long time and have greatly admired him. As Jeff has shared elsewhere, Steve has been a champion for Christian speculative fiction a lot longer than Jeff. I’m excited about the things Steve hopes to bring to Marcher Lord Press.

On that note, pray for this transition. Pray for Jeff Gerke as he leaves Marcher Lord to pursue other areas God has called him to. Pray for Steve Laube as he steps into this new position. Pray for Marcher Lord Press. Change is never easy. But prayer can ease the transition.

Here is the link to the official press release: Steve Laube Buys Marcher Lord Press

*The Q&A with Steve Laube is now live.

2013 in Review

The WordPress.com stats helper monkeys prepared a 2013 annual report for this blog.

Here’s an excerpt:

The concert hall at the Sydney Opera House holds 2,700 people. This blog was viewed about 11,000 times in 2013. If it were a concert at Sydney Opera House, it would take about 4 sold-out performances for that many people to see it.

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How I Write a Novel

Last week I shared on my facebook page that I had written almost 100,000 words on Heir of Hope (the third book in the Follower of the Word series). I had one person leave a comment that she had written 10,000 words and that was hard for her. She couldn’t imagine writing 100,000 words!

You know, she’s right. I remember back in high school and college writing a 15-20 page paper and I thought that was a killer (and I had weeks to work on it). Now I write that much in less than a week. So how do I do it? How do I not only write 100,000 words, but actually write something worth reading? Here is how I write a novel.

1) I plan my novels out years in advance. I have an idea and I create a folder for it on my computer. As the idea grows, I add to the folder (like scenes, dialogues, character information, etc…). I also recently started using Pinterest as a place to keep images that inspire me. By the time I am ready to sit down and write the novel, I pretty much know who is in the book and what is going to happen.

Storyboard
                              My storyboard

2) I take one day and do a storyboard. I condense every scene/chapter into one sentence, write it on a sticky note, and pin it to my board. This becomes my map. I don’t always follow it exactly, but it gives me the big picture and major events so I don’t get writer’s block.

3) I write the rough draft. Usually the rough draft comes out to be about 120,000+ words and takes me almost a year to write. I will admit every time I start a novel, I feel overwhelmed by the idea of writing that much. So I break it down. I remind myself that to eat an elephant, you just need to take one bite at a time (no, I don’t eat elephants, but it is a great picture).

My “bite” is 500 words a day, 4x a week. Every week, every month, until the novel is done. Most of the time I write more, and sometimes 5 or 6x a week. But there are some weeks when writing feels like pulling teeth. I groan and gripe and drag my computer out and make myself sit and write 500 words.

I had one month not too long ago that all I could do was write 500 words a day, and that is all I did. Usually this happens in the middle of the book. I’m tired, I hate everything I’ve written, and I don’t know if I will ever reach the end. But I press on. I don’t go back and change anything, I just keep writing a little bit everyday. Usually I find my joy again when I reach the last third of the book and see the light at the end. I also realize what I wrote wasn’t bad. In fact it is quite good and worth keeping (one reason why I don’t go back, usually it’s my emotions rather than reality that is telling me my writing is junk).

4) After almost a year of writing, I finish the rough draft. At this point, I am sick of this story and need to do something else. I put the rough draft away for a month and recharge, usually by reading gobs of books or playing games. Then I come back and spend 2-3 months tightening all the scenes, checking for continuity, adding description, and making sure the flow is good. I don’t do a lot of rewrites, probably why it takes me so long to write a rough draft. I put most of my energy and thoughts into the story during the rough draft stage. When I come back, the meat of the story is there, it just needs some clean up.

5) I do one more glance over for grammar and typos, then I am done. I have completed a novel. Is it ready for publication? Not at all. I’ll explain next week how I publish a novel. This is simply how I write a novel: one bite at a time 🙂

Winners!

Thank you, everyone, who stopped by my blog, said hi, and entered the Amish Vampires in Space giveaway along with picking up your clue for the Author Scavenger Hunt. Now, for the winners…

Drum roll please…

For the Author Scavenger Hunt, here are the winners:

Grand Prize winner: Renee Manning

2nd Prize: Christ Morcom

3rd Prize: Christa Scott

Congrats you three!!! I know Brock Eastman will be in touch with you and with all of us authors so we can mail off those prizes to you :).

And now the winner for the ebook Amish Vampires in Space by Kerry Nietz…

Another drum roll…

Beth Gibson Rumbaugh! Congratulations! I will be emailing you to let you know (if you didn’t see it here) and to send AViS to you as soon as possible.

Thanks again, everyone, for joining in the fun :).

 

Author Savenger Hunt

Author Scavenger HuntHi! Welcome to the Author Scavenger Hunt :). As part of the hunt, I have a couple things going here. First, a wonderful post by Rachel Starr Thomson. Second, the next part of the clue you need to continue on with your hunt. And third, a chance to win an ebook copy of Kerry Nietz’s Amish Vampires in Space.

To begin, here is Rachel Starr Thomson.

Rachel Starr ThomsonRachel Starr Thomson is a writer, indie publisher, and editor. She’s the author of the Seventh World Trilogy, The Oneness Cycle, and other books published by Little Dozen Press.

Rachel is a homeschool graduate, a dweller in southern Canada, a lover of long walks, good books, and hot tea, and a counter-cultural revolutionary who thinks we’d all be much better off if we pitched our television sets out the nearest window.

And here is her guest post

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God on Paper

Reading and writing are incredibly natural to the Christian life.

Ours is a God who wrote a book; we are, famously, “people of the book.” So it only makes sense that Christians should be people who read, read deeply, and communicate their faith and the life they have in Christ through writing. For me this has been a journey.

As I kid, I read voraciously, and indiscriminately (I was homeschooled, and I like to say my parents educated me by teaching me to read and pointing me at the library). When I got serious about following Jesus, for a time I dropped reading almost entirely, and writing along with it, as I recalibrated my lifestyle.

Eventually I realized that reading had added an intellectual, spiritual, and emotional dimension to my life that was beneficial as a disciple and that I had stripped that out by dropping books. So I began to read again, more deliberately this time, actually setting aside significant time every day for devotional reading and making more time for fiction as well.

I also rediscovered my gift and calling as a writer. When I was young and first beginning to write, my dreams of “making it” were pretty self-aggrandizing, so I tended to see writing as self-indulgent and maybe not very Christian. Two things combined to change my perspective on that: first, that I ended up with a lot of time on my hands and writing was something productive to do that made use of a gift God had, after all, given me; and second, that people began to tell me God had spoken to them or touched them through my writing. That still happens and never ceases to amaze me—startle me, even. It happens so much that even though I now have very little extra time in my days, I’m learning to make writing a priority. It’s one of the most fruitful things I do.

The real challenge of discipleship, I think, is not dropping our day-to-day lives and our natural gifts and trotting off to a mission field or pulpit somewhere. Rather, it’s inviting Jesus into the lives we live, the gifts we have, and the jobs we do, and letting him teach us how to do them the way he would. Just as Jesus was the best (and uncanniest) fisherman Peter and John had ever met, so he is the best writer I will ever find, and the best teacher of writing. He is the master of words. And he delights to use them.

I’m currently in a season of writing a lot with the intent of going full-time. That makes reading more important than ever as well. Writing and reading are spiritual disciplines for me: they involve setting aside more pressing demands and things that pay better (and faster) and pressing in because of God’s calling. I seek God in books, and I seek to show him through my writing. I ask him into my reading time and I ask him into my stories. That he comes is a powerful and marvelous thing.

My current project is The Oneness Cycle, a contemporary fantasy series that tackles subjects like prayer, spiritual warfare, unity in the Spirit, and forgiveness in ways that I hope will bring them into sharp relief. A friend of mine calls the series “the Christian life on steroids.” The first book, EXILE, is free for your e-book reader from Amazon and elsewhere, or you can pick it up in paperback.

(Books 2-4, HIVE, ATTACK, and RENEGADE, are also available in e-book and coming soon in paperback.)

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Thank you, Rachel, for sharing your writing journey. Writing has brought me closer to God as well :).

And now for all you readers who are on the hunt, here is your next clue: to thank you,

Now that you have your clue, you can continue on to Rachel’s blog and your next clue (Click HERE). If you get lost during the course of the hunt or you’ve finished collecting all the clues you can go HERE to enter the full mystery phrase and bring your scavenger hunt to a close. I hope you’ve enjoyed learning about all the amazing books and authors on the tour and hopefully you’ve entered the many giveaways on their sites.

Amish Vampires in SpaceAnd speaking of giveaways, if you want to enter the giveaway for Kerry Nietz’s Amish Vampires in Space, click on the link provided! Rafflecopter Giveaway

Enjoy!

Ebook Sale!

Hi everyone! Tomorrow I will be participating in an author blog scavenger hunt. What is that? It’s where you follow links through a list of blogs, read the interviews or special features and find part of a clue. Once you have collected all the clues, you turn them in at the end of the scavenger hunt for a chance to win the grand prize (an iPad mini and a paperback book from every author on the scavenger hunt).

What does this have to do with an ebook sale? During the week long scavenger hunt, both of my ebooks will be on sale for $0.99 everywhere: Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Marcher Lord Press. That’s right, Daughter of Light (Christy and Carol award finalist) and Son of Truth (the second book in the Follower of the Word series) are $0.99.

Daughter of Light is the story of Rowen Mar, a woman who can see the soul of a person with just a touch of her hand. Son of Truth continues Rowen’s story along with Caleb Tala, an assassin and prince introduced in Daughter of Light.

If you are looking for a gripping fantasy series to read this winter, then download these books. Already read Daughter of Light? Now is the time to pick up Son of Truth. Read both of them? Then consider gifting these books to your friends and family 🙂

Here are the links:

Daughter of LightDaughter of Light: Amazon

Daughter of Light: Nook

Daughter of Light: Marcher Lord Press

 

 

Son of TruthSon of Truth: Amazon

Son of Truth: Nook

Son of Truth: Marcher Lord Press

 

Daughter of Light and Son of Truth Book Giveaway

AutumnOnce again October is upon us, my most favorite month of the year! To celebrate October, every year I feature anything and everything speculative on my blog: books, movies, sites to visit, etc…

To kick off my celebration of October, I am giving away an ebook bundle of my own books: Daughter of Light and Son of Truth, the first two books in the Follower of the Word series. This series follows the life of Rowen, a woman who discovers a mark on her hand, a mark that–when she touches someone–allows her to see inside that person’s soul. If you enjoy Terry Brooks or Terry Goodkind and are looking for a fantasy series that is not YA, then enter and try this one out.

There are many ways to enter: tweet about the giveaway, like my facebook page, leave a comment, etc… Just click on the link to go to the giveaway and start entering. I will randomly choose the winner on October 8th, my birthday to be exact. I thought this would be a great way to celebrate, by giving away books 🙂

So what are you waiting for? Click on the link! Rafflecopter Giveaway

And, if that giveaway isn’t enough, you have another chance to win my books, along with every other book my publisher (Marcher Lord Press) has ever published, in celebration of its 5th year anniversary: www.marcherlordpress.com